2013年9月10日星期二

看看好國年夜教逝世常犯十大年夜英語語法過錯

 不才裏的十組例句中,第一句是病句,第兩句則是矯正過往的句子。

  1、句子之間缺少過渡性的單詞或詞組

  ① Salmons swim upstream, they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.

  ② Salmons swim upstream, and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.

  2、省字號(')的濫用

  ① the government's plan

  ② the plan of the government

  3、代詞之間的性、數、格紛歧緻

  ① Everyone has their homework.

  ② Everyone has his (or her) homework.

  4、主句与從句的顺序短妥

  ① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over, after the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds.

  ② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds, some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over.

  5、兩重可認

  ① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.

  ② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.

  6、潤飾語、插進語的位置不当

  ① The forest fire, no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, jumped the firebreak.

  ② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, the forest fire jumped the firebreak.

  7、意义含糊的先行詞

  ① The band members collected his and her uniforms.

  ② The band members collected their uniforms.

  8、介詞跟冠詞的濫用

  ① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms.

  ② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms.

  9、句子貧累成分

  ① When aiming for the highest returns, and also thinking about the possible losses.

  ② When aiming for the highest returns, investors also should think about the possible losses.

  10、记卻斷句

  ① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time.

  ② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time.

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